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Sensitive  2/27/07


I AM an extraordinary person inside and out.
I stand Tall because I believe in Who I AM inside and out.
Yet you find a way to...

make my flowing blood boil
make my radiant skin crawl
make my shining eyes weep
make my wonderful smile droop
Nothing good has come from knowing you...
You Creep!
©2007-2010 ~bellapersona
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:iconillmoon:
oh, but try and use a little more advanced words if your going to do rhymes? the poem was strong until it said you creep to ryhme with weep. idk creep didnt really do it for me. but thats just me. and i still like it very much.
:iconillmoon:
definitly a whiff of fresh air from the emo i-cut-myself-in-the-dark-room-that-is-my-life poems. and not written to shabby either. i really like the concept of this poem. it reminds me of someone who's taken way more shit than they should've and is finally using their self respect to put an end to it. i like it.

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